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Distorted Point of View
Contributed by
TeenageEmoGirl
on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 11:11:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Self-mutilation as
A razorblade dances on my wrist
Performing a piece
I've enjoyed many times before
Grand finale as the blade lies on the floor
A battle scar.
A symbol of beauty.
A sign of weakness.
Whichever you prefer
Whichever you perceive
But I believe the true me
Lurks from underneath my sleeve
It all depends on your point of view
Mine a front seat, up close and personal
Scars parallel to my veins - blue
Soon to be red...
Soon to be red...
For I am weak for it
And its all I can seem to do
Disgusted with myself
And this distorted point of view
Copyright ©
TeenageEmoGirl
... [
2004-04-06 23:11:00]
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Re: Distorted Point of View
(User Rating: 1 )
by Rylo on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 12:41:41 AM AEST
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| Well this poem certainly says a lot, but i wish you the best in trying to find yourself, and other than that this was a great read. |
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Re: Distorted Point of View
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by Quilted_rag_doll on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 08:42:58 PM AEST
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I love it. It definetly says alot, and it is true. About there being different points of view. Its very describtive and nicely worded. I love the overall poem itself and its title. its very good.
Auryn |
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