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Awaking with Eyes Closed
Contributed by
billyspfan
on
Tuesday, 24th September 2002 @ 01:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Darkness dawning downed the wires
Cinders charred in concealed fire
Windows waxed with scalpel skin
So unabashed, evading win
She gets so close, she hears the din
Smells the sin
Still wants in.
The soul is saved in optic loss
Squeeze the heart to drain the cross
Hideous house with facade blinding
To haunt it, climb the road unwinding
Still unsure of future finding
Fractured binding
Never-minding
In acne sand, she shallowly slides
To a jaundiced door, love locked inside
Uncovered keys from vacancy mist
But the lock itself is encrusted with cyst
Pounding with enamoradic fist
Embracing this
Misanthropist
Windows deformed, stream stifled light
Its beams rape the heart, cursing with sight
She turns and leaves with truth untying
Bars of beauty have no need prying
Eyes torn open to stop the crying
Heart left dying
Hopeless trying
Copyright ©
billyspfan
... [
2002-09-24 13:00:00]
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Re: Awaking with Eyes Closed
(User Rating: 1 )
by XoIrishXo on
Tuesday, 24th September 2002 @ 01:44:11 PM AEST
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Hey...me again...
Awesome format...great poem!! I am duly impressed!
XoXo
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Re: Awaking with Eyes Closed
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by MisterRight on
Tuesday, 24th September 2002 @ 03:23:31 PM AEST
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Wow Bill... this is great. I really like it. Great ryhme scheme.
Welcome to the site
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Re: Awaking with Eyes Closed
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by makx10 on
Wednesday, 25th September 2002 @ 06:35:53 AM AEST
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Wow Bill. That flowed so well and is spoken right from the heart! I love it. An oldie but goodie right? Keep up the writing. I love to read them!
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Re: Awaking with Eyes Closed
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by Archie on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 05:55:48 PM AEST
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| Great poem, though I hope you won't be a sad poet. Nothing is ever hopeless, even when it seems so. |
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