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My demon
Contributed by
Crash
on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 03:09:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I sit across a table from you
I look into your eyes
I see your fear
You know I found your lies
I have been played
Many times before
Each one before you
was shown the door
But for reasons
I don't know
I can't let myself
Let you go
Is it love?
What a trivial thought
Give you the boot
I know I ought
But your still here
Not six feet away
With my cold heart
You tryed to play
Then I think,
When will they learn?
For nothing physical
My body yourns
My mind is no toy
My heart not as well
So any who try
Can go to hell
But here you sit
So close to me
I thought you were smart
Yet your too dumb to flee
I hate your ignorence
I hate your smile
I knew you played
All this while
You look dumbfounded
Told to expect me screamin
But how could I?
In the face of my demo
Copyright ©
Crash
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Re: My demon
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by Avarice_Riot on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 03:42:49 AM AEST
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| I really enjoyed reading this...interesting take on how love can suck us in even when it's not doing any good. Well-written and raw with emotion. In short, it rocks :) |
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Re: My demon
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by Dizza_13 on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 03:59:27 AM AEST
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Great write. full of emotion.
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Re: My demon
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by deathdrop on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 04:23:01 AM AEST
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wow! it's truely magnificent. i feel for extacty what you mean, you expressed you feelings very strong and clear, it's made this a wonderful peice to read.
defantly keep it up!
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Re: My demon
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by zeppchic420 on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 03:58:22 PM AEST
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it's hard to let go of someone you love, despite all the hurt they may cause you. believe me , i knowall to well sadly. great write
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Re: My demon
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by Thumper0719 on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 11:04:21 AM AEST
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| Dang thats strong your a really good writer! . I like your work keep on writing.
*Sam and Brittany* |
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