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Kisses Can Come True
Contributed by
strange_lindsey
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Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 04:51:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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The lips a velvety crimson color
The silhouette a flawlessly cut rose
Burgundy soaking every corner
Twisting up and emitting a heavenly glow.
The kiss a delicate corporeal touch
The flavor a sweet tangerine
Breathlessly panting for another gentle drop
Of the pleasantly unattainable love.
She dreamt of this kiss far after it transpired
And continues to each night
Genuinely yearning for the reassurance
Of the kisses she longs for so much.
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strange_lindsey
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2004-04-07 04:51:12]
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Re: Kisses Can Come True
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by charmer on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 07:47:06 AM AEST
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Wow very good write. I like your expression of feeling.
Best wishes,
CHARMER |
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Re: Kisses Can Come True
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by fallensilence on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 11:42:50 AM AEST
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this is simply amazing and by far my favorite one of your poems. you've done a perfect job with this poem. keep it up . -david
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Re: Kisses Can Come True
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by arden on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 03:46:26 PM AEST
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so lovely. this was just amazing to read. so beautiful. loved it.
Arden |
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Re: Kisses Can Come True
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by mountainhigh on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 03:17:42 AM AEST
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| One enters this verse not thinking of a kiss, and leaves dreaming of crimson lips, the velvet of a rose and in awe once again. Beautiful. Thank you. |
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Re: Kisses Can Come True
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 10:30:35 PM AEST
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| mmm... beautiful poem... a kiss to be lost in, my dream as well, one that never stops like a suspended moment in time... hugs n' love nessa |
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