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A Figment of the Imagination
Contributed by
strange_lindsey
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Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 05:23:56 AM in AEST
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In the form of an angel he envisions her
Lingering elegant raven black hair
Eyes the color of melancholy sapphires
Mesmerized, all he can do is stare.
She saunters into the room gradually
Each footstep taken with poise
Above all the commotion-and hullabaloo
His heartbeat is all he hears, no noise.
She smiles and his legs quake
She speaks and it pierces his soul
He is enthralled by her beauty
Before he recognizes it- she becomes his goal.
He reaches for her hand- Shall we dance?
She strolls perfectly into his arms
Her body and his- a flawless fit
He enchants her with his charms.
Embracing each other tightly
And peering expectantly into each others core
They lean in for the forever-anticipated kiss
And- He wakes up pleading for more.
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Re: A Figment of the Imagination
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by reilt on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 06:39:01 AM AEST
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| i loved this poem...it's beautiful |
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Re: A Figment of the Imagination
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 08:07:16 AM AEST
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A very enchanting reverie you have painted here...I can see her, almost as an angelic ballerina in pirouette; sharing the dance of a lifetime, and the feeling of newly ignited love. Breathtaking poem Lindsey.
Truly,
-Dan |
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Re: A Figment of the Imagination
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by arden on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 11:47:03 AM AEST
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oh oh oh i loved this!!
just so beautiful and wow. great job its perfect. keep it up.
Arden |
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Re: A Figment of the Imagination
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by alecfernadez on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 03:30:58 PM AEST
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| This is like one of those perfect love stories, its told in such a way that it makes a really really good story that you can get into |
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Re: A Figment of the Imagination
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 04:51:54 PM AEST
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i have a lot of dreams like this! a really good poem very well written.
wildejohnny. |
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Re: A Figment of the Imagination
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by mountainhigh on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 03:35:58 AM AEST
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and he awaits sleep, and the return to that elegance of her dance, and the soft gentle smile of her soul.
another night saved from dreamless sleep, thank you. |
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Re: A Figment of the Imagination
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by AspenGlow on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 09:08:24 AM AEST
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The dreamer must return to this dream, over and over and never end.
beautiful dream, thanks for sharing. |
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