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will you,
Contributed by
spooky
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Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 05:54:28 AM in AEST
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we sit alone,,no one around,,
no childen ,,no friends,,
just us,, I'm happy,,just you and me,,
we will share the skies,, the nights,,,,
days if we can,,no one around,,
just you and me,,
it doesnt really bother ,,
as long as i have you,,
it wont not bother me,,
to share the nights alone with you,,
if you should leave me befor i go,,
will you wait for me,,
will you be at the gate to carry me through,,
will you love more than day,,
you are my wife,,
i will show you the skies,,
i will give you the nighs,,
we will share forever with each other,,
for you are my life,,
God bless them both,,
they are my parents
craig s. meeks
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Re: will you,
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by Dizza_13 on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 09:42:53 AM AEST
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u must really love ur family, i wish i did as much, lol. Good work ur parents should b proud of u.
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Re: will you,
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 10:14:58 AM AEST
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Is this.... about your parents, and their love for eachother?..... I think that's what I got out of it.....
I'm probably wrong (bad at guessing some of these things....lol)
At any rate, this is a sensitive write. Nicely done =)
God bless,
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Re: will you,
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 06:04:43 PM AEST
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| A good family man with great fam. values! loved this Christina |
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