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Disharmony
Contributed by
pl_rage
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Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 07:25:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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A single thought sets the string in motion
Never properly tuned for a vacant chamber
A note of pain vibrates through every fiber
No counterpart to create a perfect harmony
The first note dies and slowly fades away
Aching echoes cast a shadow of melancholy
New darker thoughts begin to emerge
Playing with emotions raw from past abuse
The resulting melody is terribly chaotic
Striking discord on a whole new scale
There is no way to escape the pandemonium
Caught in the crescendo of repressed feelings
Suffering deeply under this pounding onslaught
Love can hurt in such a wide range of ways
All alone in this heartrending symphony
Bearing the loneliness in unvoiced agony
Soon the dismal pain clouds all awareness
The world is a bleak scene for one alone
A thought of love was the provenance
Sole producer of this mood altering opus
Copyright ©
pl_rage
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2004-04-07 07:25:47]
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Re: Disharmony
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 07:36:57 AM AEST
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| really loved this poem...it struck a chord! |
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Re: Disharmony
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by Dizza_13 on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 09:28:37 AM AEST
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Sad, but beautiful. So touching, a very good poem.
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Re: Disharmony
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
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Wow..loved the metaphors used here.... This is really well written. I am so glad to see you here again......
Hugs from your old pal....
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