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You say love is art...
Contributed by
dAWn
on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 08:01:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You say love is art
So I smudge it
I tear the canvas
I break the brushes
Still I cannot get enough
And before you can wince
It’s over
A sudden eclipse on your face
We fell from grace
Tears falling down
Into the lake around you
The puddle spreads
With each and every insult we say
You were the angel
I was your devil
Your temptation
Your redemption
Your damnation
Wanting you
To still the hurt
But you can’t stand anymore
The holding of my arms
You want me to
Stay here, don’t leave
Not yet
There will be more to come
Maybe a fit, who knows?
Was it love?
Was it lust?
Was it yearning?
I don’t really remember
Then it was doubts
Then it was unconcern
Then it was ennui
Some of it still here
Now it’s just anger
Now it’s just hurt
Now it’s just lethargy
Can feel it lucidly
Now it’s over
Copyright ©
dAWn
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2004-04-07 08:01:07]
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Re: You say love is art...
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by wyrd_faerie on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 08:29:22 AM AEST
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| this is amazing...i'm sorry, i hope you heal soon... |
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Re: You say love is art...
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 08:43:10 AM AEST
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all that emotion in one poem, lifes not nice but it makes for great poetry! well done
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Re: You say love is art...
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by Dizza_13 on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 09:13:52 AM AEST
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Wow, lots of raw emotion. Excellent Work.
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Re: You say love is art...
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by Avarice_Riot on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 09:28:06 AM AEST
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| Oh dear sounds like you've had a pretty bad case of heartbreak but you expressed it beautifully here, especially in the first verse. I loved the analogy of comparing love to art. |
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Re: You say love is art...
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by reilt on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 10:34:17 AM AEST
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| amazing...you can really sense every emotion and it's something that's easily related to. |
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Re: You say love is art...
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by angrycheerios on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 01:46:19 PM AEST
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| i agree with evryone else. the emotion was very moving. nice work. |
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Re: You say love is art...
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by swiftsouljah on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 05:00:21 PM AEST
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| if love is art i havent mastered it |
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