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circles
Contributed by
wyrd_faerie
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Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 08:25:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Im falling down so many miles below the ground, so many hours out of town
And for once, Im not searching for a way out, just closing my eyes because youre not around
Its been so many years that Ive wandered these lonely streets, looking for a life I belong
And eventually, I guess I knew Id reach the end, alone again, because Ive been this way for so long.
And I am so scared, and so tired of crawling through these endless days,
Writing these endless words, crying these endless ways, regretting every word I say
Running in endless circles, losing endless games with cold blades and flames
With these endless bruises and open wounds, just trying to numb this endless pain
And god, I just cant explain.
Ive lived so many lives, worn so many masks just trying to hide
Ive written so many sides of this broken soul to show, just trying to find some praise, some pride
And no matter how many times I try, I always break down and cry, weak, barely alive
So tried of being strong, just to carry on, as I lay weeping here again, time after endless time.
Theres so many ways, so many days I wish with all my heart I could have changed
So many people I wish I hadnt pushed away, so much love I used to have I wish so much I could regain
So many promises I wish I hadnt given away, so many friendships that I wish were the same
So many games I wish I hadnt playedso many names I want so much to say
So many tears Ive cried, so much pain I wish so much would just go away.
I breathe in all these lies in the hope that one day, I can smile
That I can love like I used to, that I can laugh and joke, if only for a little while
That I can cast the magick with my words that used to flow so easily, begging to be heard
That one day there will be a reason for all this pain, something thats not so fragile as just words
And god, one day, I just wish so much that I find the strength to try
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wyrd_faerie
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2004-04-07 08:25:27]
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Re: circles
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 08:40:11 AM AEST
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a fantastic emotion packes write. I know its easy for me to say but you must start looking forward and plan your days ahead, fill your days with activity! your a great poet so maybe write more each day.
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Re: circles
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by Avarice_Riot on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 08:44:51 AM AEST
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| Wow, fantastic write with so much raw emotion...seems like you've got lots of regrets about the past. The only path to go now, if you don't want to go back into the past, is forward. Good luck and take care. |
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Re: circles
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by Dizza_13 on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 08:55:07 AM AEST
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Sad, touching and ***** great! Seems like maybe u just gotta change ur style cos this poem kicks ass! U got talent here don't waste it.
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Re: circles
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by dAWn on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 09:02:08 AM AEST
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| This is absolutely awesome. Aww wyrd_faerie *hugs you*. Life is like a rollercoaster - its natural that you get sick of the ups and downs from time to time. Come on, there ARE better days to come. You'll see the sun again, I'm positive on that...;) smile for me sweetie |
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Re: circles
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by silent on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 09:12:55 AM AEST
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So heartfelt all i can say is i have felt similar and hope you can get through it if this is genuinely how you feel. You have great talent, and it flows very well or it wouldn't affect so much.
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Re: circles
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 02:42:14 PM AEST
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This was captivating Lucie and i can say for certain that your writing definitely still flows. Your poem touched me in so many ways because i know what its like to wander alone and want the pain to just go away and I wish, to be honest, that I could at least TRY to help you through the mountains of pain but you keep on pushing me away. I hope you find someone that will make the pain go away I truly do. I want the best for you even though you think you aren't worthy. The only thing you don't deserve is this pain and I hope, I pray that someone will come and carry you through that... and that you find someone worthy of your love.
In any case a beautiful poem and be advised that although many things change your beautiful poetry will remain constant.
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Re: circles
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 11:51:47 AM AEST
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dearest sweet lucie, again another amazingly beautiful write you have shared with the world, ahh regrets can hurt, lost friendships hurt deep, maybe reaching out some will come back, for no one who knows you could ever forget you, or not love you, your a very talented, genuine, dear sweet soul, a blessing to the world, big huggies and i love you, ever nessa xxx
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Re: circles
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by Merry on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 11:56:28 AM AEST
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somewhere in those downward sprialing circles you will see the light of who you really are - and you will shine within and without - growing up is a process, don't be afraid to feel your feelings and explore them in a postivie way - soon you will be outisde of your shell and experiencing and seeing things from a different persepctive-
you are a talented writer - use the words to help you find your way
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Re: circles
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by Rakerman1999 on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 12:13:50 PM AEST
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Life is full of bad times and good times my friend. Sometimes it seems the bad takes control. It isnt so though. You have within yourself the power to make it past this and I believe you can and will. This is so full of raging emotions.
Very well done
Roses
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Re: circles
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by wild_heart_of_fire on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 12:32:12 AM AEST
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your emotions are so raw. i don't know what to say that i haven't already. your words are magick. bravo! best wishes! xoxo
~ riki lynn ~ |
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