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passing car
Contributed by
valek
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Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 11:50:53 AM in AEST
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this very small blink of a moment
not unlike a passing car on the street
when compared to the longivity of the life we lead
is the only time i spent with you, on the first day we would meet
there was something about you, something about your smile
that afterwards, would have my thoughts consumed for a very long while
things about you reminded me of someone i never met
so even this most simple conversation i will never forget
you seem so untouched, so pure and comfortable to hold
so open and unashamed though no secrets were told
nothing happened the way i wished, for more than one distraction
still how can i explain this thought, this seemingly instant attraction
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Re: passing car
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by passioneminem06 on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 11:56:42 AM AEST
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| this is a great poem and that has happened to me like 3 times...... |
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Re: passing car
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by ICEYFLAMES on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 04:41:12 PM AEST
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| HEy Zac this is an awesome poem... very sweet ... Ive learned that with every car that passes by there is a long line of traffic behind LOL |
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Re: passing car
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 11:28:13 PM AEST
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| i cant find the words to explain how your poem makes me feel but know this, the wording in which you capture your feelings is soo beautiful, that it would make any girl feel so special and set apart from the normal |
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Re: passing car
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by PumpkinPie on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 11:31:14 PM AEST
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Those kind of attractions are always a pleasure to experience.You sure brought me back down memory lane.Thanks for letting me re-experience it all again,nicely done,
PumpkinPie |
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