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Oh Beauteous Rose
Contributed by
dreamerboy1616
on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 01:13:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Oh beauteous rose
That doth ensnare me
Spare me your final death blow
Be content in capturing my heart
And entwine my soul
May we be one as was intended
Oh beauteous rose
That doth ensnare me
Spare me heart break
Of you withering
Drink deep from my soul
Absorb me into your very being
Oh but if I can endure
Yet a single moment of your heart ache
Let me be the bearer of eternal sorrow
Oh but if I can endure
Yet a single sorrow of your hearts throb
May I be your bearer of burdens
Your faithful one to the end
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dreamerboy1616
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2004-04-07 13:13:35]
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Re: Oh Beauteous Rose
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by corrupted_minds on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 01:29:37 AM AEST
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good work, i think the poem explains itself. Good write and make sure you keep at it.
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Re: Oh Beauteous Rose
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 05:57:37 PM AEST
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| very pretty:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Oh Beauteous Rose
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by kidpoet_213 on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 12:13:10 AM AEST
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Very beautifully written... keep writing... u've got potential... my friend!
~Donna~ |
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