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Don't Take It Away
Contributed by
MoonlitAngel
on
Tuesday, 24th September 2002 @ 02:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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What do you do when you've lost yourself?
What have you got left but the people you love?
Don't take away the one thing I need
You're taking everything my life is made of
You'll never know what I went through, so
You've gotta understand what she means to me
She's my light amidst darkness and the
Sunshine on a rainy, cloudy day I need
You see, my world revolves around her
And I wouldn't say that if it wasn't true
I can't explain how deep this all goes
It's only because of her that I get through
She's my comfort in times of sadness
If not for her, I would have nothing at all
Without her in my life, I can't breathe
You've never seen her pick me up from a fall
We've been through so much you'll never know
The peace that no one else could ever bring me
Lifetime promises that are so rare
Secrets that only the stars will ever hear
Best friends forever, that can't be beat
We'll always come first and that's how it should be
I'm the one she loves and needs the most
Her love, I believe, is that elusive key
You better not ever break her heart
And don't think you can take her away from me
Nothing can compare to what we've got
So just please stop robbing me of what I need
The best moments of my life are those
That I realize what I have in this friendship
It's so much more than words can describe
Never disregard my need for time with Trip
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MoonlitAngel
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2002-09-24 14:30:00]
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Re: Don't Take It Away
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by Emmie74 on
Wednesday, 25th September 2002 @ 08:14:36 AM AEST
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Awwwwwwwwwwww! Dee! I love you, man! And, like I said, don't worry! Just like you said about me, my world revolves around you, too. You're the one person in this cruel world where I know you'll never leave me, therefore, I trust you more then I will ever trust anyone. I promise you that. He will never truly take me away, it's just hard to balance my time between my bestest friend, and my boyfriend I'm in love with. But, if you ever call me in a time of need, I will come to you, always and forever.
Love always,
~Emily (aka Trip) |
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Re: Don't Take It Away
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 1st October 2002 @ 11:40:17 AM AEST
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| omg!! i feel the same way u do!! sometimes i wonder, why am i here if im not wanted?!?! u inspire me as a writer!! i love writing poems about how i feel at the moment and how my life is going!! i have a tough life but everyday try and fit in with the crowd! there, we have at least alot of things in common! |
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