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Rainy Day
Contributed by
PhantomVampyress
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Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 01:57:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The last I remember was the rainy day
you pushed me completely away
I've cried all the tears
I ever had
I suffered the Pains from yur wretched
mind games
That Rainy day I remember
I screamed alloud
you were no where to be found
JENNA
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PhantomVampyress
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2004-04-07 13:57:52]
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Re: Rainy Day
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 02:15:46 PM AEST
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Very sad and brings back memories for me.
Short and filled with emotion.
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Re: Rainy Day
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by emystar on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 05:27:44 AM AEST
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Sad but said well.
Hang tuff my friend.
luv, huggs, happy Easter,
emy |
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Re: Rainy Day
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by bernard on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 12:19:06 PM AEST
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Sad but remember the old saying "Off with the old; On with the new" Try to keep smiling.
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Re: Rainy Day
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by Putteragain on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 04:37:20 PM AEST
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sad
what more can i say
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Re: Rainy Day
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by secretwind on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 08:42:07 PM AEST
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The sweet sad flows you have are so full of the things i can relate to,hoipe all is well with you.
I like the the way you write.... |
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Re: Rainy Day
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by avanottingham on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 08:45:58 AM AEST
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| I liked the way it flowed, especially that last verse =) |
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Re: Rainy Day
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by UnlovedChild on
Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 12:17:53 AM AEST
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| Moments like these bring tears to your eyes whether you can relate to it or not. Thanks for the write! Good job. |
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Re: Rainy Day
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by myheartsvoice on
Sunday, 4th February 2007 @ 09:55:59 PM AEST
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Truly this is what it claims to be, sad poetry hope all is better now. your poems are very selfe explanitory. Nice writting and each one a story on to them selves.
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