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All Alone
Contributed by
PhantomVampyress
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Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 02:00:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Crying inside
all alone
empty deep with in
I hide in the dark
you won't see me cry
I won't let you in
I'm already dead
you killed what was left of me
There are no more pieces of me
to pick up
No where for me to run
No one for me to go to
I stand alone once again
facing all my problems on my own
JENNA
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2004-04-07 14:00:45]
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Re: All Alone
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by alecfernadez on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 02:04:18 PM AEST
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| I like this, its something beuatiful yet sad that I can relate to. A polar poem |
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Re: All Alone
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by AnGeL_M on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 03:34:54 PM AEST
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This Is Sad I Can Relate To This....Good Write ...... :-)
,,,,,,,,,LoVe,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,,, |
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Re: All Alone
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by silent on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 02:52:31 AM AEST
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I can feel this very strong, thanks for sharing. Simple yet impactful, excellent.
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Re: All Alone
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 01:23:59 AM AEST
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| ahh, jenna, beautifully expressed emotion and feelings, you cover well the lonliness of being, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: All Alone
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by Justalady on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 03:37:49 PM AEST
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| Most have felt this at one time or another but you've captured it in a way that few can. Some poems are beautiful others sad, thanks for letting others realize they are not alone..... "all alone" June |
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Re: All Alone
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by UnlovedChild on
Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 12:11:13 AM AEST
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| Wow great write, touching poem. That hit my heart |
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