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Alex is dead
Contributed by
alecfernadez
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Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 02:02:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Lie back onto your bed of red roses,
Close those glazed eyes to the world,
Manipulate your paralysed limbs into poses,
That suggest you impending doom
I guess It would be better,
If I wrote happy things,
But lifes to short,
And so is youth
When its taken away from you
I guess I could laugh,
But I'm just a deer-
Caught in the headlights
Clasp your hands around the knife,
That eventually took your life,
Bloody your last suit,
Send pieces to everyone
I guess It would be better,
If I wrote happy things,
But lifes to short,
And so is youth
When its taken away from you
I guess I could laugh,
But I'm just a deer-
caught in the headlights
Dream away the day has gone,
The last day you'll ever live,
Because now your last deed is done,
And how could they ever forgive
Know it now,
Life just passes away
Know it now,
This is just the begining
Of the end
Because
Alex is dead
Copyright ©
alecfernadez
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2004-04-07 14:02:56]
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Re: Alex is dead
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 02:10:27 PM AEST
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wow this poem is good.. it has a nice flow to it.. its true that childhood flies by and some of us don't get to enjoy it cuz of bad lives.. awesome write
peace and hope
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Re: Alex is dead
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by lostinmyself on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 02:22:28 PM AEST
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| wow, this is brilliant, really good. i love the flow, and everything. amazing write. *hugs* phil xxx |
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Re: Alex is dead
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 02:35:09 PM AEST
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so sad, yet poetic to the last... it was beautiful in its own special way.
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Re: Alex is dead
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by AnGeL_M on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 03:28:52 PM AEST
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This Was Sad-although it had alot of flow to it...I liked it...Great write...
,,,,,,,,,,,LoVe,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,,, |
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Re: Alex is dead
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 04:15:29 PM AEST
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alec, this is soooo sad, but a true poetic genious. Please keep writing, you have such a talent.
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Re: Alex is dead
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by Whisper on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 10:06:57 PM AEST
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Hmmm interesting write. Sorry about Alex.
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Re: Alex is dead
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by Avarice_Riot on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 01:00:21 AM AEST
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| Wow, brilliant rhythm there, every verse flows neatly from one to the next and it's very sad in a beautiful poetic way. Well done. |
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Re: Alex is dead
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by deathdrop on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 09:10:33 AM AEST
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| very well put. i love it. |
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Re: Alex is dead
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by Cynthia on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 04:05:55 PM AEST
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| Such a sad poem. I can feel your emotions in this write. Excellent work. *S* Cynthia |
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