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Lost Children
Contributed by
sunraybutterfly
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Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 04:57:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Things that we had and lost like when thunder rolled over the plains when little children would play
Would you know me, know then would you walk in this world with me then when I was another and you were free
Into my beautiful vision I disappear a world my own I master only, where children laugh and tears are a forgotten entity
Where we roam free, one species where a broken heart is something that is a fairy tale where when you love it is complete
Where I can look at my beautiful childs eyes and she loves me and remembers how much I love her.
With eyes like rivers and hair like a stallion a sprit so pure and true so precious
This world is for her she lives in my castle in this world
I was so free enough to find her I am over come by this power that is my possession
Open fields such beautiful sights, a river with water so clear and a sky blue like emeralds I sit a weep for this beauty this divine world completely - overcome
Can you see it in your minds eye there she is she dances with the trees as wind carries her beauty her laughter forever in my mind
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Re: Lost Children
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 05:08:57 PM AEST
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wow....exceptional write. Sooo beautiful.
Very well done and welcome to ypdc :o)
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Re: Lost Children
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by Jackee_line on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 05:41:10 PM AEST
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A beautiful write, very moving.
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Re: Lost Children
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 06:07:37 PM AEST
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wonderful, captured me from the first verse
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Re: Lost Children
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by AnGeL_M on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 06:42:25 PM AEST
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This Is Good I Liked It...Beautiful Write :-)
And Welcome To YPDC... |
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Re: Lost Children
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by Avarice_Riot on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 06:00:38 AM AEST
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| Wow, you had written a splendid and gorgeous write, I loved reading it. Thanks for posting this up. |
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