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THE SEA OF MANKIND
Contributed by
lovingcritters
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Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 07:25:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
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'THE SEA OF MANKIND"
From serene shores calm complacency
Time's beginning she's remained chastely
Powerful undercurrent swept and tossed
Treading water alleviating evil at any cost!
Tumultuous waves oppose her beauteous traits
Blushing clouds envy her beauty n'er stored hates.
Roaring storm's tidal waves of mankind's greed
Determining goodness increase her steady steed.
Her head held high, hated for doing what is right.
Swims against constant currents, 'tis her fight!
Raging waves, mankind's seas killed her friends.
Numerous circle gave way toward cooling trends!
Her warmth felt by sea creatures hearts a glow.
Hardened hearts of like, no longer feel nor show.
Swimming alone, headed for tranquil beaches
Her strength sucked by pretentious leaches.
Beautiful Sea Lady, how are you able to survive?
Surrounded by those who contrive to deprive?
Her strength emits a splendid bright aura.
Deepest dark seas her bright light of greenish aqua.
She is unnoticed by those going with the current.
Struggling to stay with her remain her remnant.
Emerging wicked waves, upon peaceful sand.
Surviving hate, selfishness, anger, firsthand!
I hear her whisper 'tis a hum's echo of the sea
No one soul can swim without hope, faith, and me.
Guards my heart, my soul, my strength bravely
My name is Love.........or Charity!
Created by
Cheri Cam LeBren
April 8, 2004
"Loving Smiles
guard the miles!"
"The best portion of a good man's life,
His little, nameless, unremembered acts.
Of kindess and of love."
~William Wordsworth~
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Re: THE SEA OF MANKIND
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 08:03:09 AM AEST
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God is love and Love will prevail. Love this metaphor about us and the sea. Beautiful as always.
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Re: THE SEA OF MANKIND
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by gothicangel on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 08:04:08 AM AEST
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| really nice! keep on the good work! nicely written=) |
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Re: THE SEA OF MANKIND
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by Avarice_Riot on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 08:30:59 AM AEST
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| Omg lovely lovely poem, amazing imagery and overall a great message. |
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Re: THE SEA OF MANKIND
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 02:31:57 PM AEST
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Tremendous message here. Beautifully visual. I still feel the good (or God) will prevail over all.
Love n hugs,
Rita |
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Re: THE SEA OF MANKIND
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by Necromant on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 03:49:34 PM AEST
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Stunning poem! Wow!! It's really incredible Loved it!!
Anne :D |
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Re: THE SEA OF MANKIND
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by AnGeL_M on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 09:26:22 PM AEST
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Beautiful, Beautiful Poem Loved It.
Awesome Message Also...
********LoVe***AnGeL********
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Re: THE SEA OF MANKIND
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by Kie on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 09:43:48 PM AEST
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ConSue you just keep getting better and better.
This was an excellent poem, really very good.
Kie |
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Re: THE SEA OF MANKIND
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by Baronhawk on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 11:26:17 AM AEST
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How is it that you always keep alive this spark so great and nice. A redoubt in the wars of humankinds eternal greed. How can a heart stay pure within this infernal squalor... of life's bitter realities... but you and your Lady ocean.. Love or was it charity keeps firm your stoic resolution keeping true upon your charted course. Again my envy at such clear skill and perhaps a heart without agony.... to be untouched unbitter at your advance experience is a wonder!
A great experiene as always.. cheerio! |
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Re: THE SEA OF MANKIND
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by loveisendless on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 05:53:03 AM AEST
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WOW! NOW THAT TOOK ALOT OF GREAT TALENT TO WRITE A PICE LIKE THAT!! IT WAS WRITTEN VERY,VERY WELL!!! LOVED IT!!!!
LOL-DAN!!!!! |
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Re: THE SEA OF MANKIND
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 06:18:51 PM AEST
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Lovely....enjoy your poems so much...keep up the great work....Love ya
RITA2344 |
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Re: THE SEA OF MANKIND
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 11:11:42 PM AEST
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oh connie this is a most beautiful poem, written with style and your wonderful way of drawing your reader right into the poem! hugs n' love nessa
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Re: THE SEA OF MANKIND
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by emystar on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 12:00:00 AM AEST
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Very powerfull masterpeice.
luv, huggs,
ur brat,
emy |
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