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The What
Contributed by
bleeding_chains
on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 12:42:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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A touch unheld so wistful and bright
Turn away to hide from the thunderous night
A scream so loud so black and blue
Treasure your heart a darling so true
Tremble in the corner mask from your scream
Throb from your ears hope its a dream
Comfort your life with a blanket so fine
Keep it from darkness its not your time
Your heart so black your love that died
The dream that failed the truth that lied
Your skin that broke your thought that dreamed
The tear that cried and the soul that screamed
The blood that dripped the scars of fear
Your preayer that killed the end thats near
Another fake smile hurts you inside
Keep it from breaking until you have died
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bleeding_chains
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2004-04-08 12:42:12]
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Re: The What
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by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 01:23:20 PM AEST
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| wow, thats brilliant. great use of language. if you dont mind me asking, how old were you when you worte that? *hugs* phil xxx |
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Re: The What
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by Necromant on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 04:07:11 PM AEST
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Awesome poem filled with vivid description! Wow to be your first poem you must be really talented!
Anne :D |
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