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Falling
Contributed by
Arius-Inues
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Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 04:48:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Standing on a bridge I waiting,
For someone to hold me tight,
Sitting on the rail I stared,
At the dark clouds comming my way,
With a flash of lightining,
And a roar of thunder,
The rain came down,
For hours I waited,
But they never came,
Oh joy I hear some footsteps,
I spun around fast,
Only to relise their not there,
The spin caused me to lose my balence,
So I grabed the rail that was so wet,
My fingers slipped,
And my boddy Fell,
Seconds seemed hours,
Muinets like days,
Inches form the ground,
I braced for the end,
When suddenly I was back at the top,
This makes no sence,
I try to think how it happened,
Looking down I see a grusom sight,
My body splatered on the ground below,
And the water washing the blood to sea.
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Re: Falling
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by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 05:56:33 PM AEST
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| i like the twist at the end. a great write, *hugs* phil xxx |
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Re: Falling
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 06:27:27 PM AEST
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| I liked the imagery and how you worded it. And the end was very cool. Very nice poem. |
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Re: Falling
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by sunshiny on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 01:17:46 AM AEST
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| Very original. I like it! Keep writing! |
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