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what's the point
Contributed by
JustScream715
on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 05:25:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Nothing feels good
Nobody cares
Im just there
With no purpose
Good for a moment
Then just forgotten
Thrown out
Without a second thought
Copyright ©
JustScream715
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2004-04-08 17:25:26]
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Re: what's the point
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by WordPoet on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 05:43:01 PM AEST
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Passing thoughts of neglect and unconcern written with succinct clarity and purpose. You seem to write with a familiar purpose.
Nice write... |
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Re: what's the point
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by WordPoet on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 05:44:03 PM AEST
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| Ok.. Now in english.. I can relate... good job... |
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Re: what's the point
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 06:22:38 PM AEST
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| Wow short but it says a lot. I liked this very much. Nice poem! |
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