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--insert typical lost love poem here--
Contributed by
reachingzero
on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 08:04:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I want to understand you,
I want to know your heart,
Where you've never been.
What you're made of.
I finally know you,
But not your heart.
If I knew you better,
I could learn what fascinates you.
Your hopes,
Your dreams.
Youre my hope,
Youre my dream,
But only a dream.
Only a dream.
I'm not what you thought.
I actually care.
Copyright ©
reachingzero
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2004-04-08 20:04:11]
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Re: --insert typical lost love poem here--
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by Kie on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 08:17:18 PM AEST
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You know I think every person wants another person to want to know those things about them. This would be a great poem to give to someone.
Fantastic write...
Kie |
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Re: --insert typical lost love poem here--
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 12:36:55 AM AEST
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Another great poem RZ. I really feel your style and i feel the words as i read them. I can really relate. And the title is so clever... LOL.
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Re: --insert typical lost love poem here--
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 12:51:12 AM AEST
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I can think of times in my life when I should have said these very words...hell, even now, I know I should say them to someone.
I like this. A lot. It's not so much only about the lines, but also what is written between them; you've done a good job of saying so much with so few words.
By the way, I got a kick out of the title too. Just a tinge of dark humour to make this all the better.
Truly,
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Re: --insert typical lost love poem here--
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by corrupted_minds on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 03:26:13 AM AEST
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good poem , love the heading it really sucks a person in.
Woei Queen |
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