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Worlds Loves
Contributed by
Hannah_Heaven
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Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 10:59:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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i want to fall all the way down
i want to move but i cnt feel the ground
the world is spinning and im being left behind
i want it to stop but its jst gettin faster
an my problems are churning inside
i want this solved
i want my body
but it hurts so much inside
my love is yearning an my eyes are blind
my senses are giding me to u
but the world doesnt want this im confused is it rite?
u seem to be the one
the lite blindin my skin
the moist life in u convinses me
im fallin down
i cnt get up
this cannot be
u are jst watchin as i drop
u must be like the others
u want me to crawl
i wnt stoop to the worlds obedience
i want my own rules
i know wots rite an wots worng
an this world is wrong..........
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2004-04-09 10:59:26]
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Re: Worlds Loves
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by GeorgeJamesDelgado on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 11:10:05 AM AEST
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Your situation is well expressed in your poem.
Go with you gut instinct. It's usually correct.
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