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Bitter Tears
Contributed by
emphaticplacebo
on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 12:21:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Bitter tears stain my weathered face
Rolling down to replenish my dry lips
The taste of bittersweet deliverance
Present with every salty bead it drips
Tears roll on as I reveal my downfall
My shimmering salvation in all its glory
Carefully crafted with souls of the fallen
My polished blade tells its own sad story
I stroke the blade over my wrist gently
Imagining the release from pain I will feel
Its sharpened blade will deliver me from pain
The torturous pain that is all just too real
I gather all my courage to push the blade in
I can feel the blade score my awaiting flesh
I feel almost immediate release of my demons
I feel my lifeblood, my blade and skin mesh
From my wrist, I feel it trickle down my fingers
Mixing with the droplets of my bittersweet tears
Almost rhythmic, my blood pumps its regret
With every slowing beat of my heart I release my fears
My salvation lingers in the midst, luring me closer
I slowly drift away from the pain I felt for so long
From the cage that has trapped my flailing soul
Away to the serene place where my spirit will belong
Copyright ©
emphaticplacebo
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2004-04-09 12:21:42]
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Re: Bitter Tears
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 12:38:30 PM AEST
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| I'm in awe, that's a great poem. I like the emotion and overall nice job. |
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Re: Bitter Tears
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by Kie on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 01:19:11 PM AEST
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Your talent shines in this poem. Very well constructed and impressive.
This was sad to read and touched my heart.
Kie |
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Re: Bitter Tears
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by fallensilence on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 01:25:20 PM AEST
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| great poem. really tugs at the readers emotions. -david |
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Re: Bitter Tears
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by Hoots on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 01:37:20 PM AEST
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That poem made me so sad! I just want to give you a great big hug! Great poem.
Krystle |
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Re: Bitter Tears
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by AmaNdAsHepArD on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 03:40:38 PM AEST
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i love this poem, the way you wrote it was just so beautiful and it flowed so nicely. your a great poet and write alot of detale i can see what ur writing as ur saying it.
**vampirchick**
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Re: Bitter Tears
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 05:25:53 PM AEST
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wow very poetic... I'm not sure what else to say besides this was amazing.
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Re: Bitter Tears
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by blueheart on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 03:26:57 AM AEST
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| Oh the talent. Such a brilliant poem, brimming with emotion. You've described your pain only too well. |
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Re: Bitter Tears
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 10:49:33 PM AEST
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That was nothing less then extrodinary. You are exceptional in all your abilities... I loved this poem, with all the emotion and pain, my heart bleeds for you.
Lindsey |
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Re: Bitter Tears
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by Avarice_Riot on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 09:58:43 AM AEST
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| Extreme waterfall of emotion here, I definitely enjoyed reading this. |
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