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Don't Say It
Contributed by
merry
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Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 12:31:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Running in parallel lines
Glancing in your direction
Moving closer -
Yet so far away
Restless energy
Like a storm brewing
Inside of us
We found something
Reluctant to say it
Or even think it
Lest we spoil it
With paltry sentiment
Sprinkled across the bed
Like rose petals
Divine scent
But quick to wither
Blow away in the wind
Leaving us naked
Uninvited in the heart
So lets not say it
We can see it
In each others eyes
Enough to spark courage
Praising what we know
Kisses unite us
Passion wraps us
In perfect gauzy veils
Safe in each others arms
gmm 2004
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merry
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2004-04-09 12:31:36]
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Re: Don't Say It
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by fallensilence on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 12:51:06 PM AEST
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| i loved every part of this poem. it was wonderful. especially the format you used. great job. -david |
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Re: Don't Say It
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by Mimi on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 12:52:28 PM AEST
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| I like this poem. I could feel the fear of spoiling it by acknowledging it, but knowing it's there nonetheless. Very nice. |
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Re: Don't Say It
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by Cobalt on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 12:53:25 PM AEST
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| Nice write. I liked. Yes, that silly little word has ruined many potentially great things. But ah the feeling itself is nice. Good write. I like the use of words in it. |
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Re: Don't Say It
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by Jackee_line on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 01:33:57 PM AEST
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I've also enjoyed this write.
Well done |
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Re: Don't Say It
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by Rakerman1999 on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 02:53:55 PM AEST
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Don't say it. don't whisper it, DONT EVEN THINK IT!! lol ok ok This is typical Merry perfection. You ways of expression are to be envied.
Roses
Larry |
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Re: Don't Say It
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 12:23:25 AM AEST
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| this is beautiful gaille:) roses, hugs n' love, nessa |
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Re: Don't Say It
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by blueheart on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 03:12:27 AM AEST
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I totally agree, it spoils everything!!
Great poem Merry. :) |
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Re: Don't Say It
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 03:18:10 PM AEST
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Love all the interjected question marks. No wonder you are published. This is another eclectic write.
Stitch |
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