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Excepted
Contributed by
TwEeK
on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 12:59:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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What do you want from me,
Torture me till I brake,
Shatter and fall,
Crashing down on you,
I won't stand it any more,
Can't handle all the stress,
You made my life a liveing ****,
That all changes now,
Waiting and takeing it,
Holding up to the pain,
The upper hand is mine,
Now I break free,
Burst out of my shell,
Passive no more,
The reverse effect,
When dealing with me,
I'm no rose garden,
Thats for **** shur,
Broke lives,
Rest at my feet,
Never to be a doormat,
Don't walk on me,
Tread on me,
Get your legs ripped off,
Can you take it,
I took yours,
All your evilness,
Sucked it all in,
I fed off your hate,
Quenched my thirst,
Pulled me away,
Stronger as satan,
***** to ****,
But i don't care,
I like myself this way,
For once excepted,
Excepted by myself.
Copyright ©
TwEeK
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2004-04-09 12:59:05]
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Re: Excepted
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by gothicangel on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 01:07:01 PM AEST
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| Hmm, nice poem.. Lots of cursing.. but I don't mind that:P Good luck forward=) |
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Re: Excepted
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by corrupted_minds on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 08:57:25 PM AEST
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welldone, you have completed a very nice poem. I tihnk it shows real raw emotions and i congradulate on that. Keep up the nice work
woei queen |
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