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Pool of eternity
Contributed by
nauphragus
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Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 02:51:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
insomniac
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My awakeness stirs in my mind,
whispers in my ear, I can't sleep.
My gaze echoes in my room.
so dull to lie like this in my bed,
I'd rather walk to the window,
but I'm supposed to lay still.
noone knows the dark beasts
which wake up every night,
for all the gates are open now.
muttering darkness, lonely sounds,
all that sleep close moan and snore,
I can't help but feel sorry for them.
who knows the secret of awakeness?
that is: eternity is no different
from not sleeping for ever and ever.
Copyright ©
nauphragus
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2004-04-09 14:51:16]
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Re: Pool of eternity
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by face-in-the-crowd on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 02:57:48 PM AEST
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| Wow, that was amazing. It really painted a mental picture for me.....keep up the good work! |
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Re: Pool of eternity
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 04:54:48 AM AEST
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great visuals from this one!
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