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The toll taken
Contributed by
ADreamWithinADream
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Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 04:35:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The toll taken
Sometimes leaves me shaken
Because you rock my whole world
Every time you come next to me
My spirit, heart and mind are whirled
I cannot think, I cannot see
Anything but you
You now realize how my feelings are so true
You cannot say the same but at least now you understand
And maybe a little more pain I can now withstand
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2004-04-09 16:35:51]
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Re: The toll taken
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by morelikelyrics on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 05:17:00 PM AEST
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very emotive and inspiring write!!
good job with this one,
as the cliche goes... short but sweet
~let life be your lyrical song, everyday's the words, every year is a verse, because in the end, there is no 'repeat'~
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Re: The toll taken
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by face-in-the-crowd on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 05:44:49 PM AEST
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| Nice write! Very descriptive, I like that. |
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