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The System of Who You 'Are'
Contributed by
6_2
on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 07:40:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Sometimes,
I hate myself
I just wish
I didn't feel,
Such anguish
If I just wasn't
That's all
Just not
Not tall
Not me
Not who I am
Or who I'll be
If there was something
I could do
To be someone
No one knew
I would do it
In an instsnt
But there's no answer
To my problem
I really hate
This stupid system
If you're mean
You have "friends"
And if you're nice
You're a loser
Copyright ©
6_2
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2004-04-09 19:40:53]
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Re: The System of Who You 'Are'
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by spider on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 07:53:08 PM AEST
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| it may be because im tres emotional at this time but this actually wants to make me cry. it hurts to know that sum1 feels how i do. |
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Re: The System of Who You 'Are'
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by alasdaircairns on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 09:13:43 PM AEST
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Very truthful and from the heart. But your the one with friends!!!!!! The rest means nothing but hot air and lies. You the one that perceives! Expand, embrace and feel your true self and your poetry will become a joy.
Good luck |
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Re: The System of Who You 'Are'
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 01:17:01 PM AEST
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| i gotta say this is great poem, and alot of us feel exsactly how it describes |
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Re: The System of Who You 'Are'
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by BrandySwanson on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 07:16:56 PM AEST
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great poem
Brandy |
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