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Night's darkness confusion
Contributed by
danimus
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Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 10:18:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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My stare is to describe how I feel
About you and I hope it is epic
Last night where's my lucky charm I need?
On the clock was seven hours behind me
A scent to sooth my night's darkness confuse
Been all alone despite a dream I've known
Meet me halfway I'm drawn by your eyes
Your convincing, dupe my intent we're more than friends
Story of dark night in a racing romance
Words broke free you've seen our rapid growth
But I am hypnotically connected, eyes of blue
In a night's darkest confusion
White lies do come true
Darkness was no stranger
No blanket of your skin
I am afraid of tonight
Where has your silk body been?
I count nights gone without skies
No closure to the eye's view
And so I have an incomplete puzzle
The last piece I need is you
Copyright ©
danimus
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2004-04-09 22:18:00]
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Re: Night's darkness confusion
(User Rating: 1 )
by morelikelyrics on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 10:43:11 PM AEST
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I enjoyed this immensely...
I liked the simple twist ending... puzzle piece and all...
reminds of a poem of mine...
~Creative, keep it up!!
~let life be your lyrical song, everyday's the words, every year is a verse, because in the end, there is no 'repeat'~
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