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Child Abuse
Contributed by
Cynthia
on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 10:28:08 PM in AEST
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The children sit in the house waiting for their parents to come home, their stomachs are empty, their feet are cold, the cupboards are bare and they have no shoes for their feet.
Their little hearts are broken in two, as they sit and wonder if their parents even care about them.
Hours later, their parents walk through the door, with shopping bags filled with new clothes.
Tears swell in the children's eyes, when they see there is nothing for them.
The children have to go another day, with an empty stomach and no shoes on their feet.
Copyright Cynthia Jones Apr.7/2004
Copyright ©
Cynthia
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2004-04-09 22:28:08] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Child Abuse
(User Rating: 1 ) by Thumper0719 on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 10:31:55 PM AEST (User
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What kind of parent could do this to there childreen! Its horrible that stuff like that really happens! But your poem was a good, strong write. |
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Re: Child Abuse
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 01:53:18 AM AEST (User
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Good write, Cynthia... I've seen this happen on many occasions..with kids at our school. They have no books and no lunch but their parents are always well dressed and sporting the latest styles... It really is very sad..
Jenni |
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Re: Child Abuse
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 02:14:15 AM AEST (User
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Woo this one rips out my heart to know these things actually happen.
U tell it so well.
May God help the innocent children.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Child Abuse
(User Rating: 1 ) by loveisendless on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 12:38:59 PM AEST (User
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GREAT POEM ABOUT A SAD SUBJECT! I HAD THE SAME PROBLEM AS A KID!! 4 KIDS
& 2 ADULTS,80% OF THE FOOD WAS FOR MY DAD & THE OTHER 5 OF US WOULD HAVE TO SHARE!!! GREAT JOB ON THIS 1!!!!
LOL-DAN!!!!! |
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Re: Child Abuse
(User Rating: 1 ) by NightOwl on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 05:33:15 PM AEST (User
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You put such a strong subject into such moving tones... awesome work!! It conveyed so much emotion!
*~Erin~* |
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