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You Make Me
Contributed by
Hurretje
on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 04:24:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
HumorPoetry
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I speak
Vowels
Consonants (Dissonance)
Words
Sentences
Speeches
Monologues
Sounding. Resounding. Silence
Breath. Moist. Quivering
Sermonizing. Pleading. Asking. Begging
Hoarse. Mute
…Lips parting…
I walk
Forwards
Backwards
Sidewards (Left and right)
Footsteps echoing. Hands reached out
Air. A light breeze. Caressing
Marching. Striding. Stumbling. Crawling
Lame. Palsied
…Step by step…
I fight
Determined
Questioning
Hesitant
Crushing. Prevailing. Falling.
Devastated
…blind…
So strong
So tired…
Proud
Exhausted…
…Sinking…
I do not speak
So quiet…
I do not walk
So scared…
I do not fight
So alone…
Darkness is light
Lack-lustre is bright
Wrong is right
In here
Where space has gone
Where time has evaporated
Where meaning has dissolved
Where logic has counted itself out
I am here, there, everywhere, nowhere
In and out
King of my castle without walls or ditches
Queen of my country without frontiers or landmarks
I am emptiness
I am scouring myriad dimensions with my ship
Without sails or anchor
Alpha is
Omega is
The Creation is
Judgement day is
Not
Who am I who is not
Tears cannot fall
They are not
No ground
For grief
I cannot hide
I cannot cry
I cannot die
I cannot do
I cannot
“Come here…”
Light is bright
Right
Sunrise
I can hide
In your arms…
I can cry
On your shoulder…
I can die
You give me life…
I can do
Speaking. Murmuring. Gasping
…sighing…
Walking. Hopping. Running
…flying…
Fighting. Striving. Gaining
…kissing…
When I am you are one
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Hurretje
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2004-04-10 04:24:46]
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Re: You Make Me
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by arden on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 04:15:28 PM AEST
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i love your poems. their so different and just awesome. i loved this.
i really like how you wrote it. great work keep it up.
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Re: You Make Me
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by JennyFruFru on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 05:01:55 PM AEST
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| oooo i like !! especially the formatting... :) :) good work : ) |
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Re: You Make Me
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by Avarice_Riot on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 02:19:55 AM AEST
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| *is in awe* I would say this is my favorite poem by you so far...the structure of the poem really impacts the reader. |
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Re: You Make Me
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 04:33:17 AM AEST
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you have such a brilliant unique writing style, this is amazing!
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