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Bored
Contributed by
silent
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Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 06:51:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Excitement in death, destruction is great
I see beyond the vision of hate
That gleam I see inside your eyes
Comes as really no surprise
As I have come and gone before
Bored with life as never before
Life is great, excitement abound
Sure I say, just look around
You age and see what I do to
But I see now, what you will to
Copyright ©
silent
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2004-04-10 06:51:43]
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Re: Bored
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by Avarice_Riot on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 09:32:51 AM AEST
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| Stellar write, you really have a way with words and that my friend, is fact and not just opinion. :) |
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Re: Bored
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 12:50:33 PM AEST
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Short and sweet and full of depth. This was a very awesome write. :)
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Re: Bored
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by Rakerman1999 on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 04:15:02 PM AEST
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I agree with A_R....you do have a way with words.
excellent write!!
Roses
Larry |
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Re: Bored
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by arden on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 04:52:58 PM AEST
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your words are so well formed and just amazing. you truly have a awesome gift. i loved this. just so well done. i enjoyed it.
Arden |
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Re: Bored
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by AnGeL_M on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 10:58:04 PM AEST
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This Is Really Good :-) You Have A Way With Words.....
Very Special Talent As A Writer Also :-)
Loved It...Great Write...Keep Em Coming.....
**********LoVe**AnGeL***********
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Re: Bored
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by Kie on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 07:40:29 PM AEST
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Oh this opens a portal of questions!
Will I see what others see even if I don't see it now?
Or will I stumble about reaching for the cobwebs of times, wrapped in nostalgia and mistakes?
I dunno and i'm rambling!
An excellent poem...
Kie |
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