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November
Contributed by
reilt
on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 09:52:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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When in November,
and the quiet streets outside
swallowed winter with silence,
We loved each other
every which way there is,
Completely consumed by a time
that made us whole.
Until the nights closed in around us,
Saturated by screams of sadness,
shrieks of woe,
Of a season that brought us together
Then ripped us asunder
In the height of its throes.
When in November,
and the bustling streets outside
made our love grow quiet...
digested by the noise,
Neath the pale moon of yesterday,
We whispered our last, sad
Goodbye.
Copyright ©
reilt
... [
2004-04-10 09:52:58]
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Re: November
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 11:00:30 AM AEST
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| wow... that's so sad... beautifully written though |
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Re: November
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by afraid_of_fear on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 11:06:41 AM AEST
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wow.. i love this.. it's so sad but so beautiful..
charlotte x_x_x
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Re: November
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by JennyFruFru on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 04:13:43 PM AEST
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| saturdated by shrieks of sadness i like that line its deep... :) :) :) keep it up this is a very deep and compleeling piece... your use of words here is very well... definally captivates the reader :) |
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