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A thought...
Contributed by
reilt
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Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 11:48:39 AM in AEST
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Tunnelled
into the mind's eye
it races.
What a thought possessed
or taken of,
Leading down these tracks
Into the depths and thick malaise.
Praise black for its name,
The pitch of it -
A haunting refrain -
What lies beneath and
Over dead bodies,
The train of derails
Colliding with carriages of itself.
A thoughtless thought
Has imagined itself
Unwell.
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reilt
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2004-04-10 11:48:39]
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Re: A thought...
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by Baronhawk on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 11:59:56 AM AEST
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| A poignant use of imagery in explaining the emptiness and futility of wandering thoughts. Such a powerful description perhaps of a literal retelling of "Much ado about nothing".... round an droun in circles.. our berating thoughts does sometimes fly. |
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Re: A thought...
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by Coaster on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 01:12:27 AM AEST
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Loved the poem. This is gonna be one of the poems I read a bunch of times. Thanks for posting it up!
Ryan |
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