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Dont U Kill Me
Contributed by
persia
on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 04:45:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Dont u kill me
Wen u almost feel da way
I feel
I can fight it
All the pain
Wrapped in da rain
Dont u kill me
Coz i can hear dem
Screaming, calling...
I can make it
I'll survive
Without da Meds
Dont u kill me
Wen u almost feel da Way
I feel
My head full of dem
Da world crawilng
under my skin
Dont u kill me
coz i lay naked
on my car
Artist...Artist save me
But dont u kill me
Wen u almost feel da way
I feel
I can fight it
Walk calm in the rain
Wrapped in all my pain
So dont u kill me
Wen u almost feel da way
I feel
Beautiful inside
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persia
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2004-04-10 16:45:50]
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Re: Dont U Kill Me
(User Rating: 1 )
by Ruby1987 on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 05:18:06 PM AEST
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This is a great write. I like the way it has random parts and then to balance it there is repetition which shows some kind of insanity. It's like you just cant get your point across, or that nobody is listening.
I like this.
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Re: Dont U Kill Me
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by PRECIOUSBECKY on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 05:24:25 PM AEST
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Re: Dont U Kill Me
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 05:00:45 PM AEST
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well worth the read nice one1
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