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BURIED ALIVE
Contributed by
PRECIOUSBECKY
on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 05:20:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I SIT IN THIS ROOM THINKING-
THOUGHTS RUNNING IN AND OUT OF
MY MIND-
MY HEART YEARNS
I CRY
I HURT SO MUCH RIGHT NOW!
NO ONE TO TALK TO
NO ONE TO SHARE WITH
ALONE
AFRAID
DREAMING
WONDERING - ABOUT SO MANY THINGS
HOPING
PRAYING- GOD GET ME THROUGH THIS!
.MY LIFE'S IN SHAMBLES
MY WORLD FALLING IN ALL AROUND ME-
I'M CHOKING ON THE FRESH BROWN DIRT... STILL A LITTLE MUDDY FROM THE
RAIN-
BURIED ALIVE
OR AM I REALLY DEAD.... BUT.....
DOES DEATH REALLY HURT THIS MUCH?
AND I CRY - MORE AND MORE EACH DAY
OR AT LEAST MY HEART DOES...
AND THE PAIN-
SLASHED WITH A RAZOR SHARP BLADE....
AND MY SOUL IS BLEEDING!
Copyright ©
PRECIOUSBECKY
... [
2004-04-10 17:20:26]
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Re: BURIED ALIVE
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by Rakerman1999 on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 05:24:18 PM AEST
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Such agony of the spirit.....
Well done.
Larry |
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Re: BURIED ALIVE
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by secretwind on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 02:42:24 PM AEST
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PAIN IS SOMETHING WE ALL SEEM TO KNOW AND NAVIGATE FROM TIME TO TIME....HERE
IN THE SHADOWS I ASK THE SAME QUESTION
"DOES DEATH HURT THIS MUCH?" EXCELLENT WRITE. |
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Re: BURIED ALIVE
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by artjunkiekyle on
Monday, 19th June 2006 @ 01:06:52 PM AEST
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Becky-
You have been through so much in your life and the fact that your still living, writing, and facing this world of numerous evils, is a truly incredible thing to do. I'm so proud of you and happy to say that you are a part of my family!
Peace, love, and, bubblegum!!! |
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