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Dirty
Contributed by
faithmairee
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Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 07:40:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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in what way have
i done you wrong
tell me, please
i do not understand
why you want
to hurt me
like you do
i loved you better
than some say
you deserved and still
you did me
dirty, dirty, dirty
i just don't understand
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faithmairee
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2004-04-10 19:40:49]
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Re: Dirty
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by PRECIOUSBECKY on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 07:45:20 PM AEST
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Re: Dirty
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by emystar on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 01:08:11 AM AEST
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Take it easy on yourself. U gave luv and if someone can't see that then it's their loss, not yours.
Some people that are lost way out there some where jus can't deal with real luv.
Take care of yourself and let someone find u that can give real luv.
Great writing.
luv, huggs, hope,
emy |
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Re: Dirty
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 01:38:08 AM AEST
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I am so sorry you are hurting. Just keep writing it out. It sure helped me. Sounds like you deserve someone much better. Good luck.
hugs,
Rita |
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