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Drowning In The Screams
Contributed by
night_child
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Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 10:20:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
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In this room of forgotten souls
Lost amoungst the faces
It is here I have always been
Here always
I shall remain
This cycle has not stopped
The chaos is too much
Always everyday
The same d*** actions
Same d*** words
This constant cleansing
Trying to be clean
To wash away the blood
Stained upon my hands
The blood of my own arms
The blood of my own soul
Never does this blood
Rid itself away
The walls around me break
I hear the splintering of wood
My mind has lost all sanity
Thanks to that one man
He is why I lost my way
Why my life is such a waste
Everyday I think of him
And all the pain that man has caused
I tried and tried to keep
My poor heart safe from him
But he took it
And he broke it
No remorse was felt from him
So try and scream I may
But nothing will they hear
All these lost souls
Each one of us is drowning
Drowning in our screams
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Re: Drowning In The Screams
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by LiquidChaos on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 10:26:32 PM AEST
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wow. its just......wow. you expressed this in a way that i wish that i could. awesome. i know exactly what it feels like to be drowning in your own internal screams. i feel it every day. hold on. great write!
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Re: Drowning In The Screams
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by jmt25607 on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 10:30:55 PM AEST
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| theres only one thing that i could say about this poem I love it lol its great woundewrful writeing and i wish i could write this way and exspress my feels in the way that u do---- well great keep it up ---- jessika |
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Re: Drowning In The Screams
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by Lessa on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 10:42:51 PM AEST
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| great write |
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Re: Drowning In The Screams
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 10:45:49 PM AEST
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This flow is so........beautiful.....it captures the emotional torture of us crippled pilgrims.......
well done.
The SecretWind...... |
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Re: Drowning In The Screams
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by kidpoet_213 on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 12:29:48 AM AEST
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WOW!! is right ... what an inpact ur words make and what an impression they have left imprinted upon ones's soul... Whoa!!! Great wrote... the emotions are well expressed...
~Donna~ |
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