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Unfound love
Contributed by
lonelywolf04
on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 10:27:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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As I walk with no cost,
I step into the darkness and get lost,
I hear someone say,
That someday I will pay,
For what I do not know,
Maybe I'm hearing things maybe I'm psycho,
I come to a hole in the ground,
And look around,
Thanking about the unfound love,
I feel a shove,
I fall down and hit the ground,
I hear the sound,
Of my bones breaking,
As I lay there dying,
All I thank about is the unfound love,
Then I die looking at the darkness above.
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2004-04-10 22:27:05]
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Re: Unfound love
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by shortchics_rock_07 on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 10:35:00 PM AEST
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| hehe.hey...i do like this poem...i really do..but just confused me condsidering to you welcome to the darkness one....but still good...ttyl.. |
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Re: Unfound love
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by jmt25607 on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 10:39:24 PM AEST
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i got one thing to say about this poem.........wow...... its great i understand every bit of it and i hope u will find that unfound love one u charish so much to find ----jessika
ps that how i understand it |
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