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Disgrace of the mind
Contributed by
silent
on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 06:20:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Within those eyes of twisted trust
Lies the bed within a garden, laden with lust
She is asleep, but awake hidden from eyes
Peering through red roses, cursing your lies
Taking each string, caressing, playing with beautiful grace
Cleansing herself, of societies disgrace
Knights on selfish horses constantly appear
Writing music, playing, what they want to hear
Within she lies alone, no music plays around her bed
Outwardly happy, internally dead
Inside asleep, on the outside hidden
Can no-one awaken this sleeping beauty...?
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2004-04-11 06:20:58]
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Re: Disgrace of the mind
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 06:35:27 AM AEST
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Wow Silent. I loved it, like I love all of your poetry. This is really beautiful. I especially like the last line... great ending to a great poem. Love the style
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Re: Disgrace of the mind
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by prajwal on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 08:27:49 AM AEST
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LOVELY CREATION.
ITS PREETY WITH A SILENT TRAGIC TOUCH
REVEALS THE DARK SIDE OF PEOPLE WE LOVE AND THEY GET AWAY |
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Re: Disgrace of the mind
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by afraid_of_fear on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 03:48:57 PM AEST
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wow this is amazing.. you are a very talented poet.
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