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Just another Seizure
Contributed by
TwEeK
on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 10:56:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
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The world is one big **** hole,
Sucking out happiness and life,
Replacing it with sorrow,
Taking away so many lives,
Dragging them under,
Poor unfortunate souls,
I go with them,
Screaming,
Thrashing,
Lie motionless,
Don't breathe,
Twitch and kick,
The room swirls around me,
Walls inch closer,
Ever closer,
Squishing my body,
Agonising pain,
Screaming at nothing,
You stare at me,
"Whats her problem?",
I thrash and howl,
Stillness,
Quiet,
Am I dead?
No,
Sadly,
I'm not,
Its all over,
On the ground,
Breathing heavily,
I shiver,
Crying,
Sobbing,
It was nothing,
Nothing for me,
It was only,
Just another seizure.
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TwEeK
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2004-04-11 10:56:37]
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Re: Just another Seizure
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by bernard on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 11:48:28 AM AEST
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| You have my sympathy if you are describing a real siezure that you have suffered .Writing about it is the best way to get rid of the feelings of despair. Keep smiling from bernard. |
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Re: Just another Seizure
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by PumpkinPie on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 09:17:39 PM AEST
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Hey Tweek,
This poem hit me hard,I have epilepsy as well and I find it immensly hard to live with it.You expressed well the feelings we have,and I hope you are feeling better.Good write,
Pumpkinpie
P.S:Read "Oh Daddy please" and "Brain Storm",it's a poem on my seizures as well.You might like them.If you ever want to chat,just write to me :) |
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Re: Just another Seizure
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by alecfernadez on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 09:53:36 AM AEST
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| This poem is so twisted it makes it both awsome and scary. WOW. I can relate to this, I spent a week in hospital when I was seven cos I had a series of fits. Cat Scans, Spinal taps ***Shudders*** its not nice when your like seven |
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