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Queen Dolly's Birth
Contributed by
Queen_Dolly
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Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 02:45:24 PM in AEST
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Once upon a black moonlit sky
A time the rules did not apply
A simple creation; yet not of mankind
Verbal beauty and thorns did entwine
A flaming star did crash and burn
And this creation did so learn
A flame has it's aesthetic value
But none could cease the pain
Thou could try to heal the wounds
But only try in vain.
So upon this night of starry skies
The queen of queens was to arise
She had no game but liked to play
She kissed her dollys all the day
Until one time she turned on them
She burnt and tortured one by one
Her precious dollys were no more
Scattered remains across the floor.
Queen_Dolly
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Queen_Dolly
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2004-04-11 14:45:24]
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Re: Queen Dolly's Birth
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by spider on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 03:40:18 PM AEST
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| normally i have like, at least one specific point to make about peoples poems, but when reading this one, and blood dolly's addiction i could only think wow. these r so kool! in an odd, twisted kinda way.. |
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Re: Queen Dolly's Birth
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by AmaNdAsHepArD on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 05:46:53 PM AEST
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well dont i love this one its my favorite on that i've read of yours so far...keep it up
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Re: Queen Dolly's Birth
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by dolly_dagger on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 05:40:25 PM AEST
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| interesting... |
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Re: Queen Dolly's Birth
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by Chade on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 08:22:58 AM AEST
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This poems kinda weird, but that is why I like it. Its a really good portrail of a Queen.
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Re: Queen Dolly's Birth
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by heartpoison on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 10:12:48 PM AEST
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Let me say this. You write poetry similar to mine, and I adore your poetry. I often write of dollie's and other such things XD Wow, I love all of your work.
XoXo
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