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Car Ride Home
Contributed by
kayald
on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 03:35:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
insomniac
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Riding in a car
With the windows barely cracked
Two sleeping heads
Nod away as we go back
Will I change?
Will everything be new?
Or will I return to my old ways,
My small-minded point of view?
Crickets and thunder
A fire stinging with rain
A walk in the forest
As the longing grew to pain
Simple memories stored
From all this week has been
But I must be reminded
That all things come to an end.
Oh Lord, stay by my side
Help me hold my faith
The techno from his headphones
Helps me to stay awake
Did I seem different to him?
What if he liked me all this time?
Will he ever say he wants me?
If not, whats the reason why?
This space between
Cant be expressed in any song
For this space between
Is not meant to stay that long
Close your eyes, sleep away,
The smell of smoke drenched in your hair
The anticipation will end soon,
For we are almost there
Copyright ©
kayald
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2004-04-11 15:35:03]
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Re: Car Ride Home
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by deathdrop on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 03:42:50 PM AEST
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it's so sad. it touched my heart!
well done.
love deathdrop.
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Re: Car Ride Home
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by Thumper0719 on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 04:00:54 PM AEST
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That is very sad good job.
*Thumper* |
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