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Jimmys Letter to Darcy
Contributed by
paper-heart-hero
on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 04:37:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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To the girl who left me to die
I say goodbye
Thank you for the scars
To the girl who ripped out my chest
I wish you the best
Thank you for the stars
Where did you go
Why did you leave me here with my heart in my hands
Its empty tonight
Ill fill it up so you can knock it over again
November days, are slipping away
And the leaves are falling down
And these brown eyes, look to the sky
As the rain crashes to the ground
To the girl who meant everything
This double knots for you
Ill tie it so tight, Ill tie it just right
So the weight wont pull it loose
Where did you go
Why did you leave me here with my heart in my hands
Its empty tonight
Ill fill it up so you can knock it over again
November days, are slipping away
And the leaves are falling down
And these brown eyes, look to the sky
As the rain crashes to the ground
Ill be gone unless you hold me up
Please dont say youre far away
It wont be long and Ill be cold enough
To freeze up the pain
Where did you go
Why did you leave me here with my heart in my hands
Its empty tonight
Ill fill it up so you can knock it over again
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2004-04-11 16:37:24]
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Re: Jimmys Letter to Darcy
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 04:46:11 PM AEST
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I truly enjoyed this write, so full of emotion.
Very well done and welcome to ypdc
Larry |
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Re: Jimmys Letter to Darcy
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by liquidsunshine on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 06:02:09 PM AEST
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How vividly descriptive and full of emotion. I hope to read more like this. Truly spectacular. Also, it sounds like it would make a good song. If you're into music or up for the challenge, you could put it to music. It honestly sounds like something you'd hear on the radio. Contact me if you ever decide to put it to melody. Bravo and encore!!!!!!!
Love,
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Re: Jimmys Letter to Darcy
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 12:34:35 AM AEST
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There are no words that could summarize how this poem made me feel, but it was beautiful to say the VERY least. That was earth shattering sad and absolutely bittersweet.
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