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About you
Contributed by
Dragontear27
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Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 05:42:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The stars at night can't compare with your eyes they shine so bright its like heaven in the skys
and lips so red if you gave me one kiss they'd knock me over dead
you're just the perfect person for me being with you is my every fantasy
i just can't think of the right thing to say my feelings for you just wont go away
but until I come up with the right word for you saying i love you will just have to do
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Re: About you
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by liquidsunshine on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 05:48:11 PM AEST
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Seems like a first love. Correct and pardon me if I'm wrong, but it's seemingly reminiscent of a first love poem in my eyes. It's a nice write.
Bravo and encore
Chels |
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Re: About you
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by kidpoet_213 on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 01:20:11 AM AEST
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Yepperz... I agree w/ Chels... seems like a1st love poem to me too... And I'm not laughing... b/c this is quite good...
U got real potential here... keep woring at it..
~Donna~ |
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