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twilight
Contributed by
matlock
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Thursday, 26th September 2002 @ 06:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
mythology
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She wrings out the imaginary wash with her elephant-skin-hands.
The once flowing flower sundress, is taught around her.
The bulging daisies:
the distorted symmetry in the fabric that once created hiding places for her children between her feet.
Her children who now fake smiles through agonizing sips.
Because she has forgotten the sugar again...
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matlock
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2002-09-26 06:45:00]
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Re: twilight
(User Rating: 1 )
by Unaekseveer1 on
Thursday, 26th September 2002 @ 08:53:16 AM AEST
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Hi Matlock,
You created a very vivid image of a familiar situation in my mind!
I like it, good writing.
With love
Dean:-) |
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Re: twilight
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by chatabox on
Thursday, 26th September 2002 @ 06:38:47 PM AEST
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sad reflection on how things can become.
A most excellant poem. |
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Re: twilight
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by Lia on
Friday, 27th September 2002 @ 12:30:42 AM AEST
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| You have pulled a memory right out of my mind...what on earth are you doing inside my head?? Out I tell ya Out!! hehe... |
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Re: twilight
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by CARAAAAA on
Monday, 7th October 2002 @ 06:13:19 PM AEST
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| HEY I REALLY LIKE THIS VERY GOOD ONE |
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