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Negotiations In The Dark
Contributed by
melis
on
Thursday, 26th September 2002 @ 07:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Just one kiss, a touch;
No! Too much. Just one more;
Still not sure; yes, there;
Ah! Just there, but scared;
Do you care? No, not there;
Yes Im aware, but unprepared.
Will you share?
Or just take. No! Too much.
Ah! Another touch; there.
For my sake, no;
Oh dont go! Ill give more;
Just need to be sure.
I know you need, I know;
Oh please dont go!
I need too. I need to know;
Just show you care;
Ah! There, yes, there.
I need to know,
But just dont care.
Ah! There; yes, there,
And there.
Copyright ©
melis
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2002-09-26 07:00:00]
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Re: Negotiations In The Dark
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by WordPoet on
Thursday, 26th September 2002 @ 07:31:30 AM AEST
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| Big loopy grin on my face after reading this one... When does the video come out? ;-) |
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Re: Negotiations In The Dark
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 26th September 2002 @ 07:32:24 AM AEST
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Mmmmmm..made me smile..... I love negotiating in the dark..;>)
Jenni |
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Re: Negotiations In The Dark
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by aernby on
Thursday, 26th September 2002 @ 08:11:50 AM AEST
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| You have captured the moment, and the movement. aern + |
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Re: Negotiations In The Dark
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by chatabox on
Thursday, 26th September 2002 @ 06:48:46 PM AEST
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mmmmmmmmmmm, dont you think that negotiations in the dark highten the senses.
Lovely sensual write. |
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Re: Negotiations In The Dark
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by Lia on
Friday, 27th September 2002 @ 12:28:59 AM AEST
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| OOOOOOOOOH i love the dark!! It's so sensual..heightens every moment!! ..loved this!! |
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