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sensitive
Contributed by
marly
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Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 06:47:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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every word lost within your heart
every tear shed, ignored and fell apart
every whisper heard only by me
every silenced breath left in misery
every angry yell controlled my every thought
every saddened moment
every time we fought
Copyright ©
marly
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2004-04-11 18:47:28]
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Re: sensitive
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by Sony_Boat on
Sunday, 4th June 2006 @ 03:44:55 PM AEST
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| Those tears are loud, gave me, the reader a crashing sound effect, and then silence surrounding a burst of more sound, continuous effects. GJ |
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