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i will try
Contributed by
elizabethfusco
on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 07:23:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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i will try to love you
despite my revulsion
i will try to touch you
and ignore my repulsion
tiny hands of this child
taken and made too old
too soon.
the secret hidden for so long
i suppose the whole world is blind
it must be
not to notice me.
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elizabethfusco
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2004-04-11 19:23:25]
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Re: i will try
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by JadedExistence on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 07:28:29 PM AEST
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A very emotional, well written poem. Very good write, I hope to see more from you soon. Welcome to YPDC.
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Re: i will try
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by Stitch on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 07:30:47 PM AEST
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Yes, welcome. This is a very interesting write. I like how much you say in so few words. The sense of mystery is very enticing.
Stitch |
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Re: i will try
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by poet_of_anger on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 07:43:55 PM AEST
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| Very nicely written, strong words, very nice. |
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