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Spenserian Sonnet To A Beautiful Lady
Contributed by
ramfire
on
Thursday, 26th September 2002 @ 07:10:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Trochaic Pentameter
My love's spirit's gentle like a breeze that
blows cool o'er this my brow, most hot, feverish.
I am made calm by her presence like at
times when discontent doth make one peevish.
She is children's mother never churlish,
meeting needs with day to day devotion.
Seen ne'er showing disposition surlish,
lady having no bad fractious notion.
She doth ease all banes with soothing lotion,
wipes away hurts life delights in bringing.
Problem solver, lessens my full portion.
Oh hark! Listen stranger! My heart's singing.
Gentle spirit, loving mother, my pearl.
These and more are seen in soul of my girl.
Copyright ©
ramfire
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2002-09-26 07:10:00]
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Re: Spenserian Sonnet To A Beautiful Lady
(User Rating: 1 )
by Eastway on
Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 01:43:20 AM AEST
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| Why so few reads. Must be a new poem? I love Shakespeare's sonnets and this is a very well-written and inspired piece of poetry. It's so much better than most of the material on the site, much of which is of very dubious quality. Well done! |
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Re: Spenserian Sonnet To A Beautiful Lady
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by Ramfire on
Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 06:08:24 AM AEST
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Thank you for your kind words. Thank you for your good score. I hope I can write other poetry that you'll like.
Regards,
Ramfire |
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Re: Spenserian Sonnet To A Beautiful Lady
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by mckayla on
Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 06:28:24 PM AEST
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What a beautiful poem. I enjoyed reading it!
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